Jane: Scenes added regarding Voldemort. Can someone review?
Scene 1: ““Voldemort?” said Harry. Dobby clapped his hands over his bat ears and moaned, “Ah, speak not the name, sir! Speak not the name!””
Scene 2: “But mostly, sir, life has improved for my kind since you triumphed over He-Who-Must-Not-Be-Named. Harry Potter survived, and the Dark Lord’s power was broken”
Scene 3: “How did you escape with nothing but a scar, while Lord Voldemort’s powers were destroyed?”
Tod: Jane, this looks bad. Use the DRY principle. Please check this 600 page book.
Jane: Fixed.
Scene 1: getVillainName(“notafraid”)? said Harry. Dobby clapped his hands over his bat ears and moaned, “Ah, speak not the name, sir! Speak not the name!”
Scene 2: “But mostly, sir, life has improved for my kind since you triumphed over getVillainName(“afraid”). Harry Potter survived, and the Dark Lord’s power was broken”
Scene 3: How did you escape with nothing but a scar, while Lord getVillainName(“notafraid”)‘s powers were destroyed?”
Tod: Jane, this is better, but there’s still duplication. And the “Lord” is part of the name.
Jane: Fixed.
Scene 1: getVillainName(“notafraid”)? said Harry. Dobby clapped his hands over his bat ears and moaned, “Ah, speak not the name, sir! Speak not the name!”
Scene 2: But mostly, sir, life has improved for my kind since you triumphed over getVillainName(“afraid”). Harry Potter survived, and the getVillainName(“dark”, “lord”)‘s power was broken
Scene 3: How did you escape with nothing but a scar, while getVillainName(“notafraid”, “lord”)‘s powers were destroyed?”
Tod: It’s okay, but I’ve seen better. You can add the scenes to the book.
1 month later Jane comments on a ticket: We need to add this part and I’m not sure how to do it:
“He pulled Harry’s wand from his pocket and began to trace it through the air, writing three shimmering words:
TOM MARVOLO RIDDLE
Then he waved the wand once, and the letters of his name rearranged themselves:
I AM LORD VOLDEMORT”
Tod comments on the ticket: Do we really need this feature? Let’s put it on the backlog for now.
